After Rain

After Rain
 
The cool winds sweep
After rain, walk
Upon the wet grass,
Stroke the dripping land.
 
Silver crytals drop
At the wind’s breath, pass
From the leaf’s green cheek,
And, like soft salt tears, descend.
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19 Responses to After Rain

  1. linda says:

    Hello to you Gorge, it has been awhile and I still thank you for talking to my friend in need, it did so much.  We are now great friends and all is going to find its way.
     
    I am writing today to tell you, that you are a petal of a rose.  You see I decided to stop going maddly through the computer blogging like a wild child everything of interest.
    I decided to stop and smell the roses….
     
    And you are the petal of MY ROSE,  Moon.
     
    MIRROR
     
    Mirror
    Reflects to reveal
    A portrait
     
    Silhouette
    A pretty pose
     
    Smile
    Hides the thorn of the rose
     
    Vanity
    Holds the mirror
     
    Frown
    Questions the soul
     
    Mind
    puts the mirror down
     
    HOT DAZE
    Hot daze
    the dry earth with cracks
    rock and twigs,
    bugs small like ants.
    Shadows where the sun does not bake.
    The sun blistering down like opac.
     
    Broken earth
    billions of cracks
    bugs scurring from shade to shade
    like a symbolic dance.
     
    Plants drooping for need of water
    they must ache….
    and the hot sun rays
    could make the earth quake.
     
    by linda
     

  2. Lakota Clay says:

    Oh, my goodness, send some our way!  We are now 107 days without ANY measurable precip.  L.

  3. Jaime Campbell says:

    Jorge, this is wonderful.  Such imagery.  I love your words.
     
    Joy to you.
    Jaime.

  4. Patricia says:

    Third time\’s a charm, Jorge, finally got in here…
     
    You are a poet, Jorge…Lovely…I love "the leaf\’s cheek"…
     
    Have a great week…

  5. Stephen Craig says:

    Jorge,  Nice piece of work.  Cant wait for the Spring rains………as ever be well.  Stephen

  6. Unknown says:

    Beautiful poem!  I\’m impressed as all get-out.
     
    I didn\’t know we were relatively near neighbors… I live at the foot of Mt. San Jacinto and see it from my window. I also have a view of Mt. San Gorgonio a little further and the Big Bear area at a distance.
     
    And aren\’t we having some spring weather in the midst of winter! It\’s glorious but I just hope we will get some rain so we don\’t have another drought.
     
    Hugs,
     
    MuMo

  7. the1stephzen says:

    Beautiful images!!

  8. Cheryl says:

    I could see it….you need to copyright these…

  9. Aafrica says:

    absolutely lovely. thank you for reminding me to take joy on the little things of everyday life.

  10. Linda says:

    Nice!

  11. Gelert says:

    I love the poem. Dreamy images called to mind. I used to love lying in a warm bed at night, watching the rain on the window.

  12. Charlotte says:

    Ah, there\’s nothing like a bit of rain to make you feel at home! British weather can only be loved by its own people!

  13. linda says:

    LIGHTS IMPONDERABLE
     
    There is a light beam at your window
    where threw it\’s cracks the wind does blow
    inside the beam the particals seem to sparkle
    and the glass seems an illusion to se warble.
     
    The flow of warm steady light, all illuminating
    as if to send forth a message from the universe
    a glow of glory, like a radiant sunburst
    to tell the story of revelations, and lights imponderable.
     
    Linda

  14. A Utah Woman Am I says:

    Jorge,
    Your poem reminds me of Tennyson (I think that is how you spell it).  He once wrote a poem about eagles and for some reason this poem\’s similarity reminded me of it. 
    The rain is my favorite form of precipitation.  Without a doubt in my mind.
    Hope you are well.  I apologize for my absence.  I hope to be back soon!
    Take Care,
    Kelsey

  15. Linda says:

    I\’m here again.
     
    Do you have time? if so, don\’t foreget to visit my blog and give me some ideas and suggestions.Tks!
     
    Good day!
    Linda

  16. the1stephzen says:

    Jorge,
    Thanks for your comment on my blog.  I always try to remember to give credit for whatever I use.  I guess it\’s the songwriter in me.  I think the shift I\’m going through is a good one.  I think it started with my lyric about which weighs more reality or magic.  Hard to explain..but I think I\’ll come through just a little more understanding and more appreciative of everyday life. 

  17. Marge says:

    Good evening, Jorge…
     
    I am not enjoying the wintertime. I don\’t ski; I haven\’t any ice skates. So I have no use for the freezing cold and snow. I really need for it to be spring.
     
    Doggone it… your beautiful poem makes me think of late springtime, a warm day after a light rain shower and me, barefoot in the grass…it\’s not making the waiting any easier.
     
    Thank you for sharing these elegantly simple, evocative words…
     
    As a poet, you sparkle like those little rain drops, my friend…
     
    Peace and Love.
     
    Marge
     
     

  18. Deirdre says:

    Beautiful images.  I love the second stanza.  You should write more poetry!
     
    But as for the reason for my visit, I just wanted to say thank you.
     
    Deirdre

  19. Nellie O Apple says:

    Aww… nice poem, J
     
    Peace & Love,
     
    nell

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